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Panzera 8 by The-Mirrorball-Man Panzera 8 by The-Mirrorball-Man
Page 8 in a 12-page comic story.

The mandatory "almost kissing" scene. :kiss:

I don't think I have mentioned it before, but when I drew those characters with their clothes on, back on page #6, I decided that they had to carry bags because their beach stuff had to go somewhere. It's a decision I've regretted while drawing the next couple of pages, because I kept forgetting that they were carrying these bags and I had to redraw whole sections of the comics to include them!

Thank you for your comments. :eager:

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1.
ROCCO: Ne t'en fais pas!
2.
PANZERA: Je ne voulais pas dire que tu étais mignon comme... Comme si toi et moi...
3.
ROCCO: Ce n'est rien, d'accord?
6.
PANZERA: Je euh... Je dois prendre cet appel...

L'obligatoire scène où ils "s'embrassent presque" :kiss:

Je ne crois pas l'avoir mentionné auparavant, mais quand j'ai dessiné ces personnages avec leurs vêtements, à la page 6, j'ai décidé qu'ils devaient porter des sacs, parce que leurs affaires de plage devaient bien finir quelque part. C'est une décision que j'ai regretté lorsque j'ai dessiné les pages suivantes, parce que je n'ai pas arrêté d'oublier ces fichus sacs et que j'ai dû redessiner des sections entières de la bédé pour les inclure!

Merci pour vos commentaires. :eager:
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Grishend Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh...! For sure that happens. that mandatory almost-kissing but you have to do something first scene. I like how you portray this! Well done!
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ;)
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naha-def Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, so close. It's easy to forget palpable tension.
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have quite a lot of first-hand experience with palpable tension.
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yowassup Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
whoo hoo!!
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeee-haaa!
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yowassup Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:slow:
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LNDFrance Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, pas mal l'histoire des sacs x) je compatis.
On touche bientôt au bout ! On va pouvoir tout lire d'un coup o/
Scène classique, mais touchante... Je plussoie Wordeea, bonne idée d'enlever la case pour le presque baiser.
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Comme je lui explique, c'est une technique standard qui consiste à donner l'illusion que le temps s'étire.
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LNDFrance Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
;)
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
uh oh .... heart shattering on the floor in 3-2-1 ....

i love the white background for the almost kiss ...
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a classic technique: removing the background, and especially removing the frame gives the illusion that time is standing still, or at least that this panel lasts longer than the others.
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oooh ... the things you learn. very neat

t'as étudier la BD ?
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Non non, mais comme toute personne qui s'intéresse à la question, j'ai attentivement lu Scott McCloud.
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhhhh
(scott qui ? ;p - googling ... )
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Professional Writer
toujours touchant(e) :rose:
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Avec le recul, je trouve étonnant d'avoir écrit une bédé qui n'est finalement rien d'autre qu'une romance adolescente.
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Professional Writer
peut-être... mais c'est aussi fondateur, comme les romans d'initiation... Tu offres une vision du personnage plus complète et complexe, ainsi... ce n'est peut-ête pas qu'une romance ado, après tout ;)
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ton point de vue me réchauffe le coeur!
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Writer
sincère (et je suis assez sensible à ce genre de personnage - la grande gueule qui cache autre chose... :)
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:nod:
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