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Panzera 4 by The-Mirrorball-Man Panzera 4 by The-Mirrorball-Man
Page 4 in a 12-page comic story.

Illustrating what is little more than an extended conversation between two people and have it not look like a series of talking heads is not particularly easy. This page is not the best looking in the series, but I'm still happy with what I've achieved from a visual storytelling point of view.

Thank you for your comments. :hug:

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:pointr: The "My Life in Flux" gallery.
:pointr: Other Tweet-Tweet comics.
:pointr: The Flux FAQ.

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1.
PANZERA: Ma QUOI?!
2.
ROCCO: C'était ta première cigarette?
3.
PANZERA: Oh. Non, euh... j'ai déjà fumé avant...
4.
ROCCO: C'est bon, c'est bon...
5.
PANZERA: Ce n'était pas ma première!
ROCCO: Je voulais juste te voir fumer.
6.
ROCCO: Je pensais que t'aurais l'air cool avec une clope, tu sais? Sexy.

Illustrer ce qui n'est finalement guère plus qu'une longue conversation entre deux personnages sans que le résultat ne ressemble à une série de têtes qui parlent n'est pas particulièrement facile. Cette page n'est pas la plus jolie de la série, mais je suis tout de même satisfait de la narration visuelle qu'elle contient.

Merci pour vos commentaires. :hug:
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:iconquestingraven:
QuestingRaven Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Interestingly, that's how my wife ended up getting me to start smoking. :)
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really? How often does that come up when you fight? ;)
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:iconquestingraven:
QuestingRaven Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Actually, not that much. We've got deeper issues to quarrel about :)
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:iconbobbymono:
bobbymono Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Have you ever made a book of these strips?
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You mean the "My Life in Flux" strips? No, I haven't. It never made any sense to me. It's not as if anyone around here would be interested in reading comic strips written in English. I guess I could make a pdf, but I have no idea how to do that, and I'm not sure if it would serve a purpose.
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ElectricGecko Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
It looks kinda like he's already on the patch for nicotine withdrawal. Either that, or he's a big fan of decorative bandages.
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aren't we all? :D
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hife Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Oh, hey, he has those cross thingies (what are those anyway?^^") on his arms. I wonder what that means...
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm... Considering that this is a prequel, it means that at some point between this story and "My Life in Flux", Panzera started putting pieces of red tape on her shoulders, just like this guy did.
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hife Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Well, obviously. But the important question is why. It's not like this is a coincidence, is it? ^^
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